This one will getcha, I think, so stay tuned.

ED’S NOTES

Wow.

I impressed myself on this page, and I tend to be my harshest critic. 

Those last two panels, showing the takeoff and landing of the plane? Chef’s kiss!

I’m getting used to the interior of Hawkins’ apartment as well. I wonder if it’s a question of my sanity, that I now know where just about everything is in his apartment? 

That online auction page was pretty decent too.  Don’t want to go on for too long about the work on this page, it might come across as vain. Suffice it to say? I am getting pretty pumped about the prospect of these next pages in the script. I think you readers will enjoy them, too.

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