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Action’s the name

The plot thickens, as do Ed’s lines.

ED’S NOTES

Everybody has cooler shirts than me, especially the characters I draw.

Stylistically, however? I’m starting to come into my own and understand a lot more of what Sabrina is imparting to me(remember when Luke crashed on that swamp planet and had that puppet on his back, telling him to do these impossible backflips? It’s a lot like that, but instead of light swords, there’s artistic technique and graphic storytelling going on).

Here, I’m doing my best to use facial expressions and poses in order to tell more of the story than you’re reading. Sure, I’m still over-exaggerating features, but I’m going through the process of teaching myself that these two guys aren’t cartoons, they’re in a comic book where a little is just enough.

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